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Post by Wrath on Jun 22, 2009 20:35:51 GMT -5
fssssssssssssssssssh
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Post by Wrath on Jun 22, 2009 21:43:25 GMT -5
fsssssssssssssssssssssssssh part two
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Post by Cassie on Jun 24, 2009 16:03:42 GMT -5
Accepted!
Wrath, this is excellent. It was most definitely worth the wait, and I have to say it is your best work yet. You captured Steven's personality perfectly, alluring to the pain in his past while at the same time making it obvious he has learnt to cope and is not in need of comfort. His history was wonderful, and his memories of his childhood were vivid and the balance of the three children is lovely. You could sense every emotion despite the apparent coolness of his demeanor. The history was played perfectly, allowing him to have the pain and tragedy, but balancing the larger (the death of his mother) with what could be seen as the minor act of having to move away from friends. However, you switched it perfectly, showing his anguish at having to leave behind 'Roarkie' and Riley, which is far more understandable than mourning a woman he does not truly remember. The writing sample was beautiful, matching in with the application perfectly, by matching his past with the present.
I adored the application, and I love Steven. <3 |
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Post by Dragon on Jun 24, 2009 21:35:33 GMT -5
ACCEPTED
I refuse to make you wait on Steven a moment longer. That should be compliment enough.
Welcome back. <3
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Post by Wrath on Aug 18, 2009 21:49:57 GMT -5
I'm dropping Steven. Again. I have no intention of reapplying and stuff so yeah.
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